A
Raucous party.
Early evening.
Roofies.
Ulysses's
Grit,
Brows that don't
Yield.
Light flashes
Ever-ready
Against the
Grass.
Unguent
Earth
Presses
Lightly
Against
Your
Ears.
Randall
Speaks.
"Pillow talk - it
Reeks of
Eager
Dudes.
It's
So pathetic."
Pile in,
Oafs,
Sorties of
Evergreens
Desperate
To
Ogle these
Half-naked
Apes.
Vapid
Elephants.
Airhorn
Blows.
Urgency is
Needed.
Monday, August 17, 2009
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Truly amazing, Jive. You've really captured the voice of Johns in the fifth stanza. Though I do have to ask, is that a direct quote?
ReplyDeleteHi, Josh, and welcome to Your ASP. Not a direct quote, no, but I did feel like I was really in the subject's head in that stanza, you know? You know, I know you know.
ReplyDeleteJatz for the comm,
JC